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The Dialogue Doctor Podcast

Dec 13, 2021

In this episode, SW Millar (also on episode 58) returns with a new scene from his short story, "A Thief's Magic." Shane and Jeff discuss using dialogue tags, making sure the reader has cinematic awareness of the scene, emotional pacing, and communicating characterization through choices the characters make.

You can find more of SW Millar's writing at

Also, download a free copy of the finished version of The Thief's Magic today here:

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